1. Spell Checker
2. "YOU'RE COMPANY IS SCREWED"...it's YOUR
3. By the end of the 2nd panel, it could have ended nicely by the 3rd...but you killed it with something not related to the piece
4. You didn't screw up bad, thank god. At least you have good talent...keep it up, just come up with a better ending.
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