The Struggles of Writing

Author: Domfiny

Date: June 17, 2002

by Domfiny
6-17-02
Chapter 1:He awoke to the smell of grease coagulating on the darkened stove-top.The kitchen was as dirty as a prison cell.Hard,dry crust entered his lips and down his slimy tongue into the great abyss
No, that doesn't sound right.
He struggled to open his eyes. He stumbled down the stairs. The kitchen was a mess. He maneuvered to the toaster and ate dry toast.
Still needs some tuning.
He woke up, went down the stairs, and ate toast in the dirty kitchen.
That'll do. Simple yet direct.
Why don't you just forget this and go on the Net? It's not like this is going anywhere. I wouldn't be expecting a Pulitzer if I were you.