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Author: boorite

Date: December 6, 2001

by boorite
12-06-01
What's wrong with my story?
Don't get me wrong. I'm sure the Stone Age shepherd demographic goes apeshit for it. But it'll fly like a lead douchebag with Gens X, Y, and Z.
So I have to punch it up a little?
I'll say. First off, let's lose the thorny crown, the nails in the wrist, the spear in the side...
But without those, I'm just a preachy old hippie!
Exactly-- the Boomer demographic.