I looked at your comic, and though it seems to show some promise, there are a few things you could improve on:
1) Quit sitting on the Caps Lock key. It would have been just as effective, while aesthetically more pleasing, had you used some more lower case letters.
2) The second frame makes no sense. You have a big fat yellow blob of sound effects while the red robot (who is supposedly making those noises) is nowhere to be seen. Bring the red guy back and move the text into his dialogue balloon.
3) Robots are boring. Ask Al Gore. You'd probably do better if the two characters were Cthulhu and dogonball.
Still, theat "RAARRR" is better than the whining we've seen from some folks lately. Hope to see more and better comics from you!
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