The narration is useless and distracting.
What the fuck is "RAL"?
Running away is not a joke.
The bee's dialog is muddled and nearly nonsensical in every panel.
(what andydougan said)
You used an X in the word "comics."
The bee's reactions don't match what sharkman is does.
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...then again, it would've been easier just to say what Inflateable said.