Well, I'm a newbie, feel free to critisize my work,

The First Meeting.... by Hellenic_Badass 10-07-01

This is the first meeting between Dr.Avya and Mr.Cottontail, first step of therapy, admitting your problem. Well Dr., I have a problem...... Yes? Out with it now, this is the hardest part of therapy, admitting you have a problem.Just try. Okay, I suck quarters from your candy machine. It's my only form of income.I'm just a homeless drunk, I live in one of your bathroom stalls...*sigh* It was you!! You, you stupid drunk, get out of here!!! And so ends their first meeting. Please, I have no place to go, don't throw me out, I beg of you. Security!!!I want this man removed from here!

Feedback by DexX 10-08-01

Hellenic Badass, you presented your comics to us in good faith, presumably hoping for an honest reaction. Well, my mother always said that if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.

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So, it's no good, huh? Oh well, there goes a few wasted hours...

There were moments that were almost funny, yet ruined by the presentation. There were moments that *could* have been funny if the joke weren't telegraphed from the 1st panel.

At least it's not the worst collection of comics I've ever seen.

Awww, that was probably my only good use of the Asian girls punchline ever, and now I feel like a big nasty person because of it. Oh well, I still like the strip. :)

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My humble opinion is that it would have been slightly more effective had you removed the Asian girls and just left in the background, either blank white, blank black, or curtain. But that's just my style.

Of course, then you lose the inside joke.

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The inside joke must be upheld at any cost!!!

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