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Not bad, LM. I like Shop By Male and Twinkie! One or two seem to have a problem with not giving us enough information (which is at least a welcome change from the usual problem some strippers have of giving too much information). For example, in Backstage Goodness, it seems like we're missing some action between the second and third panels. The punchline still works, but it comes out of nowhere, which I found disorienting.

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Backstage Goodness isn't missing anything... it's just that the action is "off camera." The "elephant" was his date, and he was a bit annoyed by the confusion.

That said, I think Twinkie was probably the best of the lot.

Perhaps, but IMHO it was a big mistake to give away the punch line in the title.

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I get that, I just think we ought to see how the announcer discovers that the elephant is Mr. Kennedy's date. One panel he doesn't know, then the next he does, like he's telepathic or something.

Some of these could have been entered in CC76.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Thanks for all the critiques and support. I'm working with limited materials here, and since drawing these weird tales myself would probably hurt them more, I'm doing what I can.

Anyways, I've done another one (News That's Not Worthy) and will probably just keep creating weird strips as ideas hit me.

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...and will probably just keep creating weird strips as ideas hit me.

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It's all good, Lizardman.

Hey! What are you calling "limited materials", eh? *stern look*

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Just saying, I'm using someone else's stock art, to create my ideas. (: Nothing against the stock art, just if I had an artist, could do a lot more.

I've been doing about four comics daily now. Check them out.