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panlid
Stripcreator Newbie

The Behavioural Patterns of Migrating Squirrels... by panlid
1-06-02
Approach....
nuts?
Moving In....
nuts?
Stay off my nuts!!!
fucking squirrels!!!

I thought it was ok, simple yet effective...

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1-06-02 7:48pm (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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I see nuggets of funny here and there in some of your other strips, but not this one.

I noticed that in your most recent one, you didn't use narrations in every panel... THANK YOU. Just because the box is there doesn't mean you have to use it for anything.

1-06-02 8:38pm (new)
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panlid
Stripcreator Newbie

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The Behavioural Patterns of Migrating Squirrels 2... by panlid
1-06-02
A stroll in the park, until....
nuts?
What the fuck is this?!?
Only one man for the job...
nuts?
I'm telling you for the last time, stay away from my fucking nuts!!! GAAAABBE!!!
Squirrel vs Gabe: FIGHT!
*gulp* nuts?
Remember me?

I see your point about the narrative boxes, but i cant help it, there just soooooo inviting....

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1-06-02 8:44pm (new)
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panlid
Stripcreator Newbie

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And just to finish off this short and totally worthwhile series...
The Behavioural Patterns of Migrating Squirrels 3... by panlid
1-06-02
We're back folks for this pay-per-view event...
nuts?
Just try an' get 'em
Is that legal?!?
nuts?
NOOOOOOOO?!?!?!?!
To the victor... the spoils...
nuts
nuts?

Damn those narrative boxes... damn them all to hell!!!

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1-06-02 8:46pm (new)
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JrnymnNate
I fling the shoddy polo stick

Member Rated:

John Carradine in Red Zone Cuba: "They ran all the way to hell".

1-06-02 8:53pm (new)
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panlid
Stripcreator Newbie

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Look, your fancy quotes wont wash with me matey....
Despite the fact i have no idea what you meant by it, so there!!!

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1-06-02 9:01pm (new)
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TheElPaso
Senior Comic Technician

Member Rated:

The inspiration, it burns!
Narr Trek by TheElPaso
1-06-02
First stop, Heaven. Though not my destination, the infinite warps found there can help. Plus, there's free Chex Mix.
Ah, here is the correct portal. This sure makes me dizzy. Say, what happens when you puke in zero gravity?
Ah yes, hell. The birthplace of all satanic. Fiery, wrathful, and merciless, this is where all long and many short narrations should go.

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My love for you is like diarrhea, I just can't hold it in. -Weird Al Yankovic

1-06-02 9:06pm (new)
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panlid
Stripcreator Newbie

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Why narrative bars should be de-criminalised by panlid
1-06-02
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what the hell is that?
what?
.
that fucking yellow thing?
oh yeah...
.
its making me very uncomfortable
shut up you whinging whore

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1-06-02 9:10pm (new)
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Acmlm
Stripcreator Newbie

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Hehe, I only used the narration boxes in 2 of my 7 comics, my 2 "RPG battle" episodes ...

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Yep. A boring pointless signature.

1-06-02 11:18pm (new)
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Broly
Stripcreator Newbie

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Way too much inanity and focus on narration boxes. All the narration makes baby Jebus cry.

1-10-02 11:21pm (new)
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