Thanks, I thought it lacked in humour (hard to make a proper plot, and to make it really funny at the same time), but made up in originality. I had arguments with myself on whether to do like 3 parts of one's story and some's else three, do one of each, or go through 1 story and then the other, but realised this would be too hard for my little brain.
Oh and kramer, notice how fuxake, is like fuck's sake, only my way. And it's not as if some word someone else made up is a real word! so there ;-)
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I am not 16 going on not 17, I know that I'm naive.