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fokker2
Stripcreator Newbie

CLICKIE

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3-09-02 4:24pm (new)
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dcomposed
C3H5N3O9

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why would anybody clickie if we alredy know its crappy?

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3-09-02 5:24pm (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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Ask crabby.

3-09-02 11:20pm (new)
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dcomposed
C3H5N3O9

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I did clickie and that wasn't crappy.

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3-09-02 11:28pm (new)
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DexX
What the Cat Dragged In

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Not bad, but please kill the narrative boxes.

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3-10-02 2:25am (new)
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fokker2
Stripcreator Newbie

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You dont like the narration? Why not?,
Well the narration was just an experiment anyway. It is my first attempt at making toons using strip creator.
(not really very fond of the "three panel format"
But I think I can get used to it)

Never heard of strip creator at all actualy, until yesterday afternoon.

But anyway, I got a few of my friends to look at "Anal Aliens" this morning, and they all seem to agree the narration sucks. so I shall kill the narration.

Another idea, was to maybe shorten the name to "AA" (THAT works on SO many levels)

-->insert evil laugh of your choice here<--

I am going be staying with "Anal Aliens" for awhile, becouse I have a Fruck of lot of ideas for it.

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3-10-02 9:47am (new)
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kramer_vs_kramer
Stripcreator Newbie

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On the plus side, we can't sue you under the trade descriptions act.

3-10-02 11:48am (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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We don't generally like narrations because of two things... 1) They can be kind of redundant when all they're doing is stating the obvious. 2) Narrations that state the obvious feel like the author isn't giving us enough credit to figure out what is going on by context alone. Here, I'll show you...

Closed Narration for the intellectually challenged. by Drexle
10-29-01
There are two asian girls in this panel. I just wanted to point that out in case you are blind or stupid or something.
Look, Asiangirl1 speaks! She appears to be soliciting sex for money... just in case you're deaf.
Herro sojah boy! Sucky sucky fi dolla, me love you long time!
Now she has caught on fire and is burning! I had to clarify just in case you though the fire was screaming.
Argh I'm burning!
She burns with passionate desire for my tender loins.

3-10-02 12:24pm (new)
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kramer_vs_kramer
Stripcreator Newbie

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To be fair to this guy, he could remove all the narrations and his strips would still be crap.

3-10-02 12:38pm (new)
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fokker2
Stripcreator Newbie

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We don't generally like narrations because of two things... 1) They can be kind of redundant when all they're doing is stating the obvious. 2) Narrations that state the obvious feel like the author isn't giving us enough credit to figure out what is going on by context alone. Here, I'll show you...

Closed Narration for the intellectually challenged. by Drexle
10-29-01
There are two asian girls in this panel. I just wanted to point that out in case you are blind or stupid or something.
Look, Asiangirl1 speaks! She appears to be soliciting sex for money... just in case you're deaf.
Herro sojah boy! Sucky sucky fi dolla, me love you long time!
Now she has caught on fire and is burning! I had to clarify just in case you though the fire was screaming.
Argh I'm burning!
She burns with passionate desire for my tender loins.


Hehehehe. Good one.

that was frickin funny.

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3-17-02 7:00pm (new)
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fokker2
Stripcreator Newbie

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I Have noticed a few toons with more than three panels Used in the toon.

My Stupid question of the day?

How is that done?

(I know, the answer is staring me in the face, and I am Just not seeing it.)

Thanks.

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3-22-02 4:29pm (new)
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BigEvilDan
Comic Overlord

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I Have noticed a few toons with more than three panels Used in the toon.

My Stupid question of the day?

How is that done?

(I know, the answer is staring me in the face, and I am Just not seeing it.)

Thanks.


Do you mean like this?

I can't believe it's not bunny! by BigEvilDan
7-23-01
One of these things is not like the others...

Use the splitter background. It's a black line in the middle of the background, which makes one panel look like two.

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"Oh, look, a joke! How original! Thank you, but if I wanted my emotions stimulated pleasurably, I'd get a whore." - Donald B. Jones III

3-22-02 5:27pm (new)
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FlarioKun
Stripcreator Newbie

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Lot's of anal sex jokes going on, you like mallrats?

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3-22-02 9:17pm (new)
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wirthling
supercalifragilisticexpialadosucks

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Maybe he likes anal sex.

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

3-23-02 10:27pm (new)
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