A word of advice: I think that most people read dialogue from left to right rather than top to bottom. I know I was confused by some of your strips because the flow of the dialogue wasn't what I expected.
Your comics aren't terrible, but I didn't laugh too often while reading them. It seems to me that too much of the humor is based on the idea of the stick guy being insane, and I tend not to find random insanity funny.
I like your titles, but I was often dismayed to find that the strips didn't live up to what I felt the titles were promising.
That said, I think you have promise. Keep at it and you'll get better with time. You might try finding some other strippers whose work you like, and figuring out what makes them funny.
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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
