read my comics and let me no how to improve them.. get bak to me l8er!

How to improve them:

1) Donate money to stripcreator.com.
2) Delete all your comics.
3) Learn that bad spelling isn't funny.
4) Figure out what is funny.
5) Start over.

I hope this has been helpful.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

6) Forget about not scyess....

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I'm to good for a signature! Oh, wait...

There's some humor in there. I liked "umm i dunno" and "Kimmy!!". I would probably find them easier to appreciate if the editing was better, though.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Yes, once you do steps 1-5 step 6 is optional.

and I don't think that was bad editing, evil_d, spelling that bad had to be on purpose. Also, note all the kitchy Internet-esque abbreviations.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

My sister uses this style too.

I'll have to agree with not_Scyess on the language, although I admit to being biased against what I call "pre-teen speak" (for reasons developed during my past, if anyone wants to hear about it).

HOWEVER, your comics range between "cute" and "nice" (i.e. potential), funniness-wise.

I strongly urge you to type normally with your future comics, and use this typing style only where it would be more logical (say, when someone's reading it off a computer).

Not make this a chorus of redunancy, but I feel the same way about the 'teen-speak.' It's annoying to read, and undermines the credibility of the comic by making it seem amateurish. Additionally, it asks the viewer to put too much effort into it as we have to translate it as we go along. Though this might work in small doses to make a point, with well over 100,000 comics on the site, using this kind of shorthand language makes you blend in with the thousands of mildly-to-seriously retarded comics here.

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The woman said, "Sir, if you were my husband, I'd poison your tea." Churchill replied "madame, if you were my wife, I'd drink it.

I never read comics that look the author does not own a keyboard with a shift key. Or comics that look like the author didn't even bother to look for mispelled words. Or anything with the words "Wot" or "Meh" in it.

Or spankling. I hate those damned comics with spankling in them!

fun·ny
adj. fun·ni·er, fun·ni·est
1) Causing laughter or amusement.
2) Intended or designed to amuse.
3) Strangely or suspiciously odd; curious.
4) Tricky or deceitful.

LOrE·a·LiE
n.
1) Causes laughter or amusement to cease.
2) Intended or designed to amuse, but not quite.
3) Strange...
4) Not all that tricky.

sox
n.
See Also: LOrEaLiE

I'm just curious -- what method did you use to chose your syllable breaks?

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Sox (N.)

See also: Raging fucktard.

As used in a sentence: My foot loves to be inserted into sox's gaping orifice!

Calm down, Taste.

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Or anything with the words "Wot" or "Meh" in it.

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What did you say?! WOT DID YOU SAY?!

Oh, fuck. I just did it, too, didn't I? FUCK ME!

I don't know if anyone around here is that easy...

RRAAAAAAAARRR!!!

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RAAARRR!!!

ahh... 'fucktard'... how witty... must be some kind of etymology

I thought you were fair game for bashing as you even bashed yourself. I will never bash you again, because now I have been bashed, and I do not like the sting it has left within my soul.

Good, you assramming fucktard shiteater.

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