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RedCheesyPoof
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Well here are first six attempts at humor, enjoy:
My Collection o' Comic Strips

1-14-03 9:10am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I like your running theme, but the comics are hit-and-miss. There are a few good ones in there, though.

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1-14-03 9:15am (new)
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Subspace
Stripcreator Newbie

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I concur with not_Scyess. The ones I enjoyed:

[Click to view comic: 'The Dangers of Live Action Roleplaying']

Would've been better if you had the first frame completely black, the second line with the text, and the third frame containing the punch line, OR; a conversation going with himself in both of the black frames. Empty frames after what's supposed to be the "punch line" doesn't do it for me. :P

[Click to view comic: 'The Dangers of Wearing an Evening Mask.']

*Laughs* Good one.

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1-14-03 9:23am (new)
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RedCheesyPoof
Stripcreator Newbie

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I agree about the "Live Action Roleplaying" strip. I was debating on whether to leave it at two panels or use all three. I see now I should have gone with three. The hit-and-miss thing is probably true as well. Perhaps I should take the George Costanza approach and do one joke a day, then leave on a high note :).

Many thanks for the constructive criticism, I'll try and get some better stuff up.

1-14-03 11:40am (new)
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punkrockskaboy
Defender of the Liquor Cabinet

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werd on the hit or miss.

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1-14-03 2:35pm (new)
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jes_lawson
I don't know what I'm doing either

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Potential noted, Blind Dates one was funny.

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1-14-03 2:40pm (new)
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Buffylavalamp
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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I concur with not_Scyess. The ones I enjoyed:

[Click to view comic: 'The Dangers of Live Action Roleplaying']

Would've been better if you had the first frame completely black, the second line with the text, and the third frame containing the punch line, OR; a conversation going with himself in both of the black frames. Empty frames after what's supposed to be the "punch line" doesn't do it for me. :P


Or maybe have the last frame black again, as if he turned the light back off so as not to see the horror anymore.

Anyway, this is S***pcr**tor. You don't have to censor the fucking swear words. :) I firmly believe profanity used properly can be funny, but censoring it like that just distracts me and detracts from any humour value.

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1-14-03 4:37pm (new)
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