Most of your comics managed to hang casually around the border of funny without crossing over. They seemed to get better as you went on, though. I enjoyed these two:
For what it's worth, I pretty much agree with what's already been said. Your comics are okay but they could be better. The ones posted above are good. I don't care much for those that break the fourth wall. I just think the technique stops being funny after the first few times.
I think you have promise, so keep at it.
--- The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
This one would've been better if the beatnik had been unable to see the phone at all. However, on the whole I quite like your strips. For early efforts, they're promising.