Over the last few days, I've been making comics for the very first time. I was just wanting some feedback from people other then my friends.

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President Evil CODE:Monica I'm not competitive. In fact, I'm the least competitive, so I win.

You should stop putting people's names in their text boxes, it really fucks up the comics

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And you know what Hell is, folks. It's Andy Gibb, singing 'Shadowdancing' for aeons and aeons...

They were OK - I didn't know who Kevin Banks was but it was funny anyway which is a good sign. I agree with Zegota: People may talk like that on IRC but not in comics.

Other than that, keep it going.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.

I suppose I don't need the names anymore. I only did them so that characters aren't confused. I think that I made enough comics so that won't happen.

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President Evil CODE:Monica I'm not competitive. In fact, I'm the least competitive, so I win.

Most were pretty funny. My wife and I both laughed at some, at the same time, together.

Now, red my comics ------>[url=http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?ID=147244&author=Jose_Anon][/url]