So... what did you all think?

God I can't believe I'm using this forum to air my pathetic neurosis!

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[i]"For the love of beatings, I plunder until my loins find satisfaction!!" [/i]

Huh? Where are these neuroses?

What?

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Batman created by Bob Kane

Hmm.
Your comic told a coherent story, which is generally a plus for series approaches...however, it wasn't terribly funny. Also, you used narration too much. For example, if you'll notice, the title of your first strip in the series is "The History of Adam" and that's also what the first narration says, verbatim.
I see what you were going for in this series, but the characters say way too much. Try to achieve the same effect with fewer words, and you'll make better series.
Some of your other comics were funny. Keep up the good work and you'll make something of a presence for yourself here.
One last note...remember to post at least some connection to the comics you'd like to have reviewed in the future, so that you don't leave us all confused with some cryptic note. For help on posting comics, see http://www.stripcreator.com/forums/help/index.html
Welcome.

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HALPUU!

Actually, I'm not particularly fond myself of the "Series" I did. It was venting, more than anything. The others, though, are the twisted side effect of having a low call volume at work, combined with intellectual diarrea and a dash of caffeine toxemia.

Feel free to bludgeon me with a dead oscelot any time you see me getting too "coffee house" too...

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[i]"For the love of beatings, I plunder until my loins find satisfaction!!" [/i]

Know what's cool?

This.

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"Old" is the old new.