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was that good? or do I need to be more irritating?

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Because I live a loveless and hollow life.

Right, so now that I'm done with that idiocy I could use some feedback and readers and stuff...

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So what does everyone think? I'd like some feedback

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no comment. moron.

Too wordy.
Occasionally, many words in a comic are good.
But I don't even know if those are funny, because it would take me as long to read those as it would to re-read all of my own.

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I'm underwhelmed

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart

calling me a moron tells me nothing, and judging from your "sucky sucky" asian girl comic I can see that your grasp on comedy is limited.

However: To Dragon- Should I make my comics just less wordy in general? Is it that they have to much stuff and you just end up not caring?

And Crunchy: Why are you underwhelmed? What did you find wrong exactly?

Oh and thanks for the feedback and hopefully continued feedback!

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I agree with using less words but, if a joke requires a lot of text, you need to make sure that the punchline is good, in my opinion. Keep on stripping! =D

Personally I don't mind verbose comics, although that is probably because most of mine also have too many words. I think that if you are going to use a lot of words, then fit in a lot of jokes. Puns, in-jokes, asides et hoc genus omne. Think of it like a cake. A souflee may be big, but in reality it is just air. A chocolate cupcake however...well, that's got substance, a giant chocolate cake even more so.

Does any of that make sense?

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