HEY D00DZ!!! I JUS MADE A TOTALLY L33T KOMIC1!!!1%@%!! U D00DS SHULD GO AN READ IT!!!! YOU WILL THINK IT FUNNY AND ACCEPT ME THUS VALIDATING MY EXISTENCE!!!! LOL!!22 ROFL#!!!#!4!!1113$ ROFLMAO!!!%185!!!!!!

GJ!!!!111111!!!!ONEONEONEONE!!!!

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THATZ M3 AND STUFF!!!! LOL!!!!!!! R3AD MY COMIC!!! BUT DON'T MAKE FUN OF ME CAUSE I HAVE A FRAGILE PSYCHE!!!!1$!!$!1#121153198706 qbyvgymdnfongdstys

was that good? or do I need to be more irritating?

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Right, so now that I'm done with that idiocy I could use some feedback and readers and stuff...

ACTION PACKED! WITH ACTION! *action not included* by OnyxBlackWolf 9-01-03

The battle should start soon. You little girls do realize that I'm going to fill you with so any arrows that you'll.......be....uh........filled with arrows. (shit that didn't come out right) W3 D0 N0T F3AR J00. W3 HAV3 TEH SUPAR POWERS. Hopefully... You little asian fools! You will suffer by my hand and that is hand that causes suffering! And lots of it! You will feal the pain of a thousand arrows ripping through your flesh! BUT W1TH 0UR SUPAR P0WERZ J00 WILL BE HELPLESS AND DEAD. VERY VERY DEAD. LIKE ROADKILL DEAD. I MEAN, THAT'S REALLY DEAD. LIKE LINDSEY DEAD. PILE OF ASHES. BOOM. THAT'LL BE J00. zzzzzzzzzzZZZZzzzzzz I think that it will be you who will find that you are the dead one and not I. You will pay for Lindsey's death by fire by ingesting many an arrow from my bow of love and justice! See the bow? SEE IT? J00 AR3 TEH STUPID. HOW V3RY F00LISH J00 ARE F0R TINKING DAT J00 CAN TAK3 US 0NZOR. J00 WILL DIE IN A SMOLDERING, CORPSE LIKE FASHION. MUCH LIKE LINDSEY DIED. SCREAMING, AND IN PAIN.

LOtCC: The Fellowship of Teh St00pid by OnyxBlackWolf 9-01-03

THE QUEST BEGINS! Hurry up Grandma Torin! You're in the front to pave the way QUICKLY. I SAID QUICKLY GODDAMIT! I thought I was in the front so that if any monsters attack us, they kill me while you run away. In the middle of the group Man this is gonna suck, I hafta move you EVERYWHERE. That's cause I'm a goddamed pile of ash you fuckwit! Now pick me back up and lets keep moving! You're spilling my goddamed legs all over the place! Thankfully we reach the end of the group... Que habla en español va a conseguir rápido VERDADERO aburrido verdadero. YOU ARE TELLING ME. HURRY UP AND DIE BY MONSTER INGESTION ALREADY SO I DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO YOUR BITCHING.

One down by OnyxBlackWolf 9-04-03

So you're me......but evil? heheheheheheh! No silly! I'm good! You're the evil blight upon the world! Oh I did not just hear that you incredibly handsome prick. heheheheheheh! Oh Evil Twin you are so cute! YOU SHOULD GIVE ME A HUG AND FILL IT WITH LOVE! 15 seconds later. oh my god Antony.... WHAT?!

The one where Antony dies....(part one) by OnyxBlackWolf 9-08-03

So the only way to stop the apocolypse is to enter that giant swirlling vortex into hell and close it from the inside? Yep. That's how it works I guess. Damned if you do, damned if you don't. Seriously who's stupid enough to go in there? I bet we could get Lindsey or Torin or Aiden to do it! No. This job is to important to laugh it off. Antony you have to be kidding. You're not going are you? Antony? Make sure everyones okay. Make sure Torin gets laid and make sure Lindsey isn't the one that does it.

So what does everyone think? I'd like some feedback

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no comment. moron.

Too wordy.
Occasionally, many words in a comic are good.
But I don't even know if those are funny, because it would take me as long to read those as it would to re-read all of my own.

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I'm underwhelmed

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart

calling me a moron tells me nothing, and judging from your "sucky sucky" asian girl comic I can see that your grasp on comedy is limited.

However: To Dragon- Should I make my comics just less wordy in general? Is it that they have to much stuff and you just end up not caring?

And Crunchy: Why are you underwhelmed? What did you find wrong exactly?

Oh and thanks for the feedback and hopefully continued feedback!

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I agree with using less words but, if a joke requires a lot of text, you need to make sure that the punchline is good, in my opinion. Keep on stripping! =D

Personally I don't mind verbose comics, although that is probably because most of mine also have too many words. I think that if you are going to use a lot of words, then fit in a lot of jokes. Puns, in-jokes, asides et hoc genus omne. Think of it like a cake. A souflee may be big, but in reality it is just air. A chocolate cupcake however...well, that's got substance, a giant chocolate cake even more so.

Does any of that make sense?

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)