I'm pretty new here, but my friends think my comics are funny. That's probably because we're all the characters, and it's about all of us and our gay lives. Well, let me know if you think they're funny. Please! Thank you!

This is probably funny in real life, but it doesn't seem to be translating well. Sometimes it seems like you don't even know what your joke is; a fair amount of your dialogue is superfluous. Try to decide on a punchline and cut out everything that doesn't relate to it, and see how that works.

This one's alright:

Dragon Warriors by kc3585 7-10-04

I started playing Dragon Warriors. It's alright. You ever played it? Nope. What did you think of it? .... I've never played it, Colby. Yeah, but did you like it? *Sigh* Sure did.....

Welcome to the site.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

My comics are about my gay life too, only I don't mean that negatively. Perhaps if 50% of your strips didn't use the words "faggot," "queer," or "gay" in a derogative manner I'd like them more.