Are these comics any good? They're probably not but, could you look?

Totally Random by Spartan117 3-08-05

May thine soul burn in my eternal resting place of damnation! I love you too Lauren!

She gets her next victim... Trenchcoat Man 9: The Ring...2.. by Spartan117 3-08-05

Hello Steve. How are you? How did you get my number? Who is this? What is this? Who am I? Is that you mom? No. I am a dead little girl who has come to kill you. Why? You viewed the tape. You little bitch. I paid good money to see Paris Hilton in bed and... Oh that tape.

Trenchcoat Man 10: The Hunt by Spartan117 3-08-05

Alright you little freak where are you? In here Steven. You'll never find me. You never know. Oh, yes I do. I am the dead girl from The Ring. Hey what the hell? I can explain Steve... Is that gun loaded?

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Don't shoot me... Yet.

*cough*

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Don't shoot me... Yet.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

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Don't shoot me... Yet.

Ask yourself this...

"Do I find my comics funny?"

And after you do that, think about this:

Are you trying to MAKE funny comics... as if you're writing for episodes of Seinfeld? Is each comic supposed to leave us in stitches? OR... are you writing for yourself, just having fun, putting down stuff that comes to your mind?

Let me know what you come up with. BTW- I'm not trying to be rude or condescending, I'm totally serious.

First comic: Horrible.

Second comic: I enjoyed that one a bit but why is his phone on the sidewalk? woundn't an indoor setting been better?

Third comic: confusing and anti-funny.

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-=- You eat one lousy foot and they call you a cannibal. What a world. -=-

Totally random ‚ funny.

That holds in general... not specifically referring to your first comic.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Okay. Alright. Thanks everyone. :)

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Don't shoot me... Yet.