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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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Post any poetry you have written here, Be it funny, serious, or biped.

I will start us off.

There's no chance to betray
and waste a fading day
If you wish it all away
You end up in dismay
Cause the truth is
You are in control
And all that you are doing
Is wasting heart and soul.

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possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

3-18-05 8:56pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Okay, here's a couple of ser...ser...(cough,cough) *choke* serious ones that I wrote.
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"The Places I Have Been"

In dead of night
A chamber still and dark
As I remember there's a lamp
Its shade a stained glass swirl
Of amber when the light is on.

But now as darkness fills the room
And I, unwilling to assume
My memory will serve me well
As I traverse an unseen floor

Reach out to feel the fragile dome
And then, a slender length of chrome
That leads me upward to the switch
That floods the room with aching light.

And as the man and woman stare
In fear at someone not quite there
And clutch the covers to their faces
Only then I realize

That I have been to many places
Seeing them through other eyes
And as in payment for some sin
I haunt the places I have been.

"Undertow"

Planting the seeds of friends in need
Sprouting from sofas like bug-eyed weeds
Silently, vaguely attempting to be
Defined by some flickering made-for-tv

I find this carpet fascinating
Sight across it sweeps, pulsating
Every point of view, I'm certain
Disappears behind that curtain

To the kitchen someone ventures
Just like walking wind-up dentures
Time has come again, I'm sure
To activate some aperture

Waves of light flow through the door
And figures wash up on the floor
Slowly shifting like the sands
And softly sifting through my hands

I can sense an undertow
Of present tense now long ago
Former lies revealed by latter
Breathe a sigh and feel them scatter

Inside this vacuum absence thrives
A waiting room for wasted lives
Impending doom a voice implies
Within this tomb behind my eyes.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-18-05 9:08pm (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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Bravo biped bravo. I have so much respect for you.

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possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

3-18-05 9:28pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Cool!

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-18-05 9:48pm (new)
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BigFrank105
Obsessive Comic Disorder

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There once was a man from nantucket...

3-19-05 6:47am (new)
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LususNaturae
Junior Comic Technician

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Untitled
There is a town that lies in peace,
Devoid of oil, soot, and grease.
The water is pure, the animals clean,
Not a flaw is visibly seen.

In this town are rows of houses,
White picket fences, not a single mouse.
Green front yards, and flower gardens
That frost has never seemed to harden.

This town is blessed to be perfect
And it is, to some effect.
But if one took another look,
One would see the cover
doesn’t fit the book.

The inhabitants of this little town
Are cursed in agony all around.
For it is impossible to be happy
Unless one has first had misery.

Moving On
Childhood days are faded, now
Ne’er to come again.
They went so fast, I don’t know how
We changed to women and men.

To some, this happens very soon
Before they’re very old;
As sick parents’ souls rise to the moon
And leave their bodies cold.

Paying reverence at graves with tact,
‘Cause crying just seems sleazier.
Everyone dies, it’s just a fact,
That doesn’t make it easier.

...have I made you sick, yet? let me try once more.

Following the Pack
A child is born with silver spoon,
Another born with wooden.
When asked the question, “Who will prosper?”
All would say “The first one.”

The wealthy child ignores his tutor,
The poor one thrives in school.
When asked the question, “Who is smarter?”
All respond, “Why, it’s the latter.”

If all were judged by fortune,
And how in public they are seen,
Not by wise heads would our country be run,
But ruled by king and queen.

And here is an excerpt from Poe that I think you will all enjoy:

Thank Heaven! the crisis--
The danger is past,
And the lingering illness
Is over at last--
And the fever called "Living"
Is conquered at last.

---
"It's a second World War II!"

3-19-05 7:34am (new)
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BigFrank105
Obsessive Comic Disorder

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Here's a poem I wrote called "Death"

Death consumes me
I hate my life
Jesus has failed me because death has consumed me
I have no reason yet to live
Death, here, death, over there
Death consumes me
Kill me now
I wish to die
For Death has consumed me
I enjoy death
Death brings me much pleasure
Death
Death consumes me
I would like to order 2 cheeseburgers and a large fry
Because I wish to die
I want to drive my Escalade
and die, for death
Cadillac makes death cars, i enjoy death
Death is good
The Blue Screen of death is my father
Death... I enjoy that shizzit

And that's some of my HAPPIER poetry!!!

3-19-05 7:48am (new)
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Scyess
Official Traveling Menstrual

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I didn't write it... but I liked it so much I made a comic out of it.

[Click to view comic: 'In the Desert -- by Stephen Crane']

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"Old" is the old new.

3-19-05 8:35am (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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There are some good stuff in here! I have already posted this one before but I'm posting it again now, because I like to do that.
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"Oh, My Goth"

Mourning the already dead future
In the tomb where my soul lies rotting
Black, like my unwashed neck
I pet the dead puppies of my childhood

Mom wouldn't buy me the good kind of Jello
The blood-red ecstasy of Tropical Fruit denied my palate
In its place the green lip-puckering slayer of my haunted spirit
Foul florid happiness of cheerful Death with hellish chunks of banana in it
I am cast into the velvet darkness

Falling falling falling
Rising...
Then falling again

Upward I cast an orphaned gaze of darkest despair that betrays the angst within my impassioned soul
Fervently praying to...who?

A silent figure glides across the darkling plain of Nowhereness
To envelop me in its suffocating cloak that smells of mildew and Ben-Gay
Gramps? Is that you?
Mom said I could stay up late tonight
To watch Conan
Or to die...again...
I SAID "OR TO DIE AGAIN"
TURN UP YOUR FUCKING HEARING AID, GRAMPS

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-19-05 10:07am (new)
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areallystupidguy
Poison Gas Pokemon

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BUNGEE BOB
A giant cliff with a thousand foot drop
Takes 3 hours to get to the top
But here comes Bungee Bob!

Known the world over for his daring feats
He keeps millions on the edge of their seats
With his propeller hat whirling and his dashing grin
His colorful cape and a heart of tin
He’ll jump the cliff, he’ll take the dive
No matter how high he’ll come out alive
Hooray for Bungee Bob!

He tests the wind, he straightens his hat
And he jumps off the cliff just like that
But he made a mistake he couldn’t afford
He forgot to tie the bungee cord
He said his prayers on the way down
And now he’s a giant red splat on the ground
Bye bye Bungee Bob!

---
It's grime time.

3-19-05 1:02pm (new)
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LususNaturae
Junior Comic Technician

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Biped, you are deliciously twisted.

---
"It's a second World War II!"

3-19-05 4:38pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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---
Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-19-05 7:19pm (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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i write things, kind of a release of being stuck in college by myself, so what if some people think its for pussbags

Looking into darkness is seeing my fate
Shadows of what once were now lie in the dust
Gathering the filth and wear of time
Like a flower blossomed then rot
Some say that time is the great conductor
The engine of our evident decline
Can time tell how I feel inside my heart?
Can my wallet tell me how to spend?
Why then must I die?
Why must I have this unending love?
What did time do for me?
But lead me onto this road of shit.
This trail to my own disdain,
All for what time cannot claim
If my love for this woman is unending
What can time do to me?
But fuel the fire inside my heart
This wound is my mind
This wound is my life
Can time heal this?
Can time change my heart, my mind?
Will time change my heart, if I cannot change myself?
Give me light then, the eternal sunrise of her touch
In the dark it is cold and in the dark I am dead.
Though I still breathe, I am a coffin in her heart

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xx( o Y o. )xx

3-19-05 9:56pm (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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Behind the desk the man sits.
Controlling all the whining shits.
"Who cares about thier plight?"
"Now my cigar needs a light."

---
possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

3-20-05 2:10am (new)
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JrnymnNate
I fling the shoddy polo stick

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Everyone wants to touch someone
wants to know them in and out
wants to never have a fear or doubt
about the feelings others shun

Someone wants to reach out tonight
you wanna know if its you
you'd like to think they have the hots for you
but you can't tell if its right.

Don't be of what they say
the worse they could say is no
you know what you would like to be
but the best you could be is free

Don't let yourself get bound to things
don't let it tear you up
you know you'll get around to things
so don't get down on your luck

if you let worries drag you down to the ground
you're just gonna get stuck and then
you'll never come round
don't dig your own holes,
try to get out of your space
cause you know everything's all just a big rat race

so don't sweat it when they don't reach out
it may just be that they have some doubts
work it out between you and yourself
and you'll be happy in the end.

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Walking through the forest
and the trees whisper pass,
as I pass through the forest
one path after the last.
Walked over the hill
and I bumped into you,
"Hello, how are you,
another one of the few
good people I liked to meet,

why won't you stay and eat
a meal with me?"
"Sorry, that'd be a treat, but you see
I'm a man who's walking through this wilderness
passing one tree never the last,
and I'll miss
you when
I pass onto the next,
but I can't stop and wait for a rest"

Feeling like I'm moving
away from regrets,
always towards something new
wishing I could stay
with some of those I've met,
but it wouldn't be true
to me on my way through the wilderness
looking for something else
going some where i don't quite know where yet
but I'm not sure I'd find it with you.

Doesn't mean it wasn't nice
to meet you just now
but I've still got a long way to go
and you know, I'm not sure how
I'm gonna get to where I wanna be at
but I'm glad I know I hope you'll be my friend
remember me when I go
because that's
what I like most about you
you like me and I like you

but we know
I'm not long for this land
so lets make the best of it while we can

because soon,
I'll be walkin through the wilderness
and the forest,
while the light grows less
bright, and then
I'll need a friend
to remember me with all the rest.

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Mexico
Their faces long their hands in their pockets
they walk across the wall
on a footbridge over a moat
they beg for my change and try to sell coke

in pharmacies and on the streets
their faces long with jaundice
the merchants call from their tiny stalls
their throats must be hoarse but I note

the mud in the streets the dogs on the run
the drummers that beat and the guitarists that strum
the man on a wheelchair at a traffic light
the shoe polishers that fight
to clean my boots
and the man who offers me his sister
then his brother
perhaps for food.

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Pacific Coast Highway

If it wasn't for the wind
being as cool as it is
or the heat being as friendly as it is
these things could maybe singe
my arm resting on the window of the car

i don't care what state my hair is in
i don't care how much sand is in
my shoes and my head is in
a glistening state of bliss
absolutely nothing is amiss

we stopped and ate some thai food
we walked on beaches clean and nude
we gawked at waves and awed and oohed
we talked to no one quite as rude
as those at home unable to compare the beautiful fable
we were in

why'd I leave?

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Knights whisper through the brushing shrubs
their swords rushing out the scabbard runs
with blood trailing through the gutter, rusted
their clothes clean, their hair back, weapons are mustered

through the dark and pale dusk, their jerkins cover
the arms that wield the sword that defends their lovers
with a swift and shrieking sound death
willows over their souls like a breath
lost forever and echoed back again
they can be nothing else but noble men

only in justice do they raise the blade
that cleaves through villains and truly made
their purpose sure; but with allure
the windswept cries of war are heard
when the grass stops blowing and the light now fades
on this dismal field of pain.

When bodies lay still and life flows cold
freshly strewn from hearts of old
evils that are now vanquished; and with amidst
apraisal, the swords are sheathed, and a fist
of defiance from the enemy rolls
open now, dipped in the blood bathed bitter shoals.

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I stood on the cliff and watched the sea
roll back and forth and into me;
it waited awhile, and greeted me kindly,
wept over my heart, and sobbing, it finaly

recieved what it gave, and then the sand
pillowed my fall when i chose to land
on the beach when I fell; for I lost my footing
and rested on twilight, so undeserving

the comforts it offered, and the stars laughed out loud
as the waves kissed my feet and admonished me, "stand proud"
so I rose to my feet; and rested my mind
and walked back without wishing to glance around behind.

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I took a walk through the winter brush
before the snow would turn to mush
the anorexic branches clung to my coat
and my boots upturned leaves lost when Winter wrote
a turn of the time,
covering the limes
and the fruit in a sudden blizzard,
the remarkable wizard
named Winter came to us
with frightening enchantments
that chilled our bones
and blew in our homes.
It's hexes blew over the whole of the realm
and we peered up at it's mighty and dark helm
which ominously posed, ruling from above
at the top of Mount Anchorage
we lived in the shadow of this virulent mount
but never could brave the face or the count
of time that rolled down to the day we surmised
that eventually we would meet our utter demise
in his spell; so we made our ascent
to plead our laments
and booming he laughed with a twisted smirk.
"You'll have to do better than that" he shirked.
And we blew back and rolled down
the mountain, but around
the horizon there rose
and watching we froze
at the sun which was rising
and a scream sounded, surprising
the hairs on our heads, at attention from tort
but the source of this report
was the king and wizard Winter
who's power had splintered
from the glares and the rays
of his enemy, who we praised.
And this was what we imagined
sitting in that chilly cabin,
while we waited for spring
and waited for the school bell to ring.

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I was irked at the sound of the life draining down
and shirked the tasks of the day to loaf around
but I found myself growing weaker as the days passed from
one to another; desperately throwing objects in a temper tantrum
I breathed in and a week passed,
breathed out, I was older
the feelings of youth began to smolder
and my age rose in a smoke that curled and did not last
and the truth of those that spoke mysteries before
rang through my head like a camphor
solvent that numbed my heart
and dulled my skull for all the parts
of my thoughts that led to this;
dread at age and sucumbed to remiss
what have you become? I asked myself
dogedly trudging abjectedly amiss
a slow march through the mud
glancing at sands and stars
by March I want to see new lands and be far
from this hole im in, dumb like cows chewing cud
a rut of sin, not to god but our
expectations of myself, mine, myselves and they
ramble about saying what I should do, all the live long day
I've come this far, it's been quite a way
but I'm definatly not here to stay
I'll walk on, tiredly at that, ignoring my kin
if only to escape the voice from within

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I'm sick of all the tepid lies
that clog one's ears and tantalize
your mind
I'd like to take a moment now
to contemplate the how and why
that you could find the gall to lie
to yourself, and then you shelf
the truth for the fantasy you are
uncouth and Laissez Faire

lets go out for a morning jaunt
take of the fat, your face gets gaunt
as we huff and puff the sharp cool air
man this is tough, life ain't fair

now we'll go back inside a bit
veg out and watch tv, and bitch
warm moist air curdles our lungs
well well well, now we're having fun
----------

We paused for coffee along a clacking boulevard
the yard of daisies in cottage windows swaying to the breeze
the frayed foam hushed stroking the slick wood walk
and danced up and down the islands and all about the keys

Then we set for a sailboat, a sloop set on the moor
stepping pass the drunken fishermen smoking cheap tobacco
they puffed and farted, and spat in the water
and we set on the jetty and set for morning glow

sliding with current along the rough pastel facade
of shops and straw hatted gentlemen with wives wearing summer dress
smiling, buying knicknacks, strolling along the boulavard
passing the keepers and sweepers in the shade playing chess

then our boat took a turn, and we moved on out
towards the harbor, stretching back in the light
we rested and chatted, content in company
and stayed there in the bay all day to the night.

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yeah i wrote all those and more

3-21-05 7:46am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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Here's a great one:

Words can be like wind and air
Blowing through a maiden's hair
As soft as velvet, suede, or silk
or smooth and heady buttermilk

Words can also be quite hard
Just ask the famed, prestigious Bard
they can be pointed, sharp, and keen
far beyond the realm of "mean"

Words can be heavy as well
Sent from heaven or from hell
light as air or dense as steel
Words can change how someone feels

Words can liberate or bind
Words are used by humankind
Sometimes they can fly high as birds,
But mostly, they're just fucking words.

---
The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

3-21-05 8:57am (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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Amen/A man
A man must be willing
A man must be bold
A man must be ready
A man must not be told
"Amen" said the father
"Amen" said the son
"Amen" said the mother
"now give the man his gun"

---
possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

3-21-05 9:31am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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I wrote mine, though.

---
The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

3-21-05 10:39am (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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HOW TO WRITE POETRY

If ever you should wish to be a poet, don't forget
You've got to think up lots of words that rhyme, like "get" and "wet"
Then make up several sentences that speak of things sublime
Strategically concluding them with all those words that rhyme.

---
Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-21-05 12:58pm (new)
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JESUSSANDWICH
is a wonderful person

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Are you suggesting that I didnt write that?

---
possible savior probable SEX MACHINE

3-21-05 1:25pm (new)
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JrnymnNate
I fling the shoddy polo stick

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quote:
HOW TO WRITE POETRY

If ever you should wish to be a poet, don't forget
You've got to think up lots of words that rhyme, like "get" and "wet"
Then make up several sentences that speak of things sublime
Strategically concluding them with all those words that rhyme.


A pedantic conformity to sentance structure
shows an incongealableness in your words

for greater breadth of verse
stretch outside your limits;
self imposed and constricting as they are.
Your prose will thank you.

3-21-05 1:51pm (new)
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possums
FERN DESTROYER

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As a "dipshit-Selby Burroughs art fag," I write poems mostly in stream-of consciousness. Here's brief little unedited interpretation of biped's favorite movie.

dusters (nmeter rhymng)*
o/`: ouatiw :

and now that very same
right eyelid to the lip
nothing but pearly skin
and misery

seven steps backward
ten years ahead
chimes echoed through
unfamiliar, rife with lead.

look at your hand
there is dust

in a mirror, in a cellar
where horses go to end
there are more hands
strewn about

the other hand is there
among the littered digits
they've worked on purple houses
they've saved widgets

that hand is familiar!
but still untangible
huh.

intrinsically speaking,
i can feel that hand.
it's holding on-
splaying stepmania with my vertebrae

a faucet goes off... and it is that hand.
it feeds me, it smacks me when I am incorrect
its name is CRAIG, PATRICE, DON- Lou?
still searching for some balance.

now it's you again. visible in reflection,
unseen by principal
hunh.
it's infused with dust.
and rust.

is it prodigious to assume you too
have helped?
give the thoughts a tranquilizer.

narcissism brought me back to the mirror.
more chimes and a trip back through times
i've never even been there.

lauington... burgoise...
krasner, johanson...
Petrarch... bUSH?

might have to murder
to set shiva and
throw drapes over the mirrors.
break.

3-21-05 2:03pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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I tried that once, and my prose told me to "shove it."

---
Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

3-21-05 2:07pm (new)
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