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BurntWolf
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[Click to view comic: 'Cartoon Nightmares: Visting Mom Continued']" />

This is only 3rd one in a soon to be great series. Just check them out for yourselves.

4-11-05 8:05pm (new)
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fuzzyman
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It would probably be better without the narration -- the images and dialogue speak for themselves in this one.

I think the punchline could be stronger, too. Though a mother who spontaneously combusts (and doesn't die) whenever she gets angry would be a pretty funny character. "Billy, look what you made me do! You made me angry and now I've gone and melted my Hummels!"

On second thought, maybe that wouldn't be funny.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

4-12-05 3:12am (new)
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BurntWolf
Stripcreator Newbie

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That was one of my first the others in the series are a lot better.

4-12-05 2:29pm (new)
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PrimoOoze1138
A refreshing kick to the pants.

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And also, try to avoid using abbreviations such as "OMG" unless absolutely necessary.

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Thar's a snake in mah boot!

4-12-05 10:50pm (new)
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