Cartoon Nightmares: Visting Mom Continued by BurntWolf 4-08-05

Mom getting pissed! You think you can just leave me here to rot! Well I thought. You thought you wouldn't need to take care of me! Well that did come to mind a few times. Mom is burning up! Well now I'm on fire and you can bury my wrinkled ass! Omg, you spontaneously combusted.

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This is only 3rd one in a soon to be great series. Just check them out for yourselves.

It would probably be better without the narration -- the images and dialogue speak for themselves in this one.

I think the punchline could be stronger, too. Though a mother who spontaneously combusts (and doesn't die) whenever she gets angry would be a pretty funny character. "Billy, look what you made me do! You made me angry and now I've gone and melted my Hummels!"

On second thought, maybe that wouldn't be funny.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

That was one of my first the others in the series are a lot better.

And also, try to avoid using abbreviations such as "OMG" unless absolutely necessary.

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Thar's a snake in mah boot!