The Misadventures of Intergalactic Burglar by mtgrnwdstar 3-05-06

Hi...I'm here to plunder your valuables...can you direct me to your most valuable objects? ..... OK, well, I think I'll just go and take whatever I can find. ...... Two minutes later... ...Who knew that the safe was equipped with shape-shifting defense technology? Schmuck.

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The Misadventures of Intergalactic Burglar by mtgrnwdstar 3-05-06

Hungry, our hero decides to stop for a bite to eat. Howdy. Welcome to the Moon-Burger. How may I help you today? Hi, would I be eligible for a 'Five-Finger Discount' Membership? Hmm, let me ask my manager. Here comes the manager! So, big guy...I hear you're into the 'raping and plundering' business. I always meet the weirdos in this job...

Any feedback, comments, criticisms, etc...would be greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance!

They weren't awful, but I didn't find them funny either. I'm guessing it might be a month and a half before you really hit your stride and start making some classic comics.

They suck. Go jump in a lake. Do the world a favor.

Nah, I'm kidding. But they weren't funny.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

Thanks for the feedback...those were just a test run to kinda get a feel for what I want to do. It's going to take a while, but I'll work my way up there.

I appreciate the feedback, both of you!

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I appreciate the feedback, both of you!

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I appriciate you not using my character to represent Michael Jackson.

Also, please remember that narration boxes are evil and should only be used if absolutely necessary.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

You also didn't overuse them as much as other newbies and I thought your use in the first comic worked well.The second comic, not so much, but you'll get better.

Right now, I'm looking through some of the CC's and learning from those. I was going to do a few of those, but I decided I needed to work on my skills a little more. I'm glad that I have some of the best talent here willing to help me out.

But again, thanks for the tips, and duly noted on the evils of the 'narration box'.

You should only do the contests which haven't already ended. Otherwsie you look like an asshole, not sure if thats what you meant though. Just giving you a heads up.

The Henderson Twins Tell A Joke by mtgrnwdstar 3-05-06

Hey, Jimmy, why doesn't the chicken wear pants? I dunno Tommy, why? Because its pecker is on its face!! Hahahaha!! .... Hey, Jimmy, where you goin'? Mustard is delicious on hot dogs.

My third attempt. I incorporated a stripcreator cliche into the strip.

Just taking baby steps here. Definitely not the stuff of legend.

That one was pretty good. I love random sayings.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

keep tryin.

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Kill Whitey.