I really like the premise of two guys working in a crumbling business, having to scrabble for food and darkly regressing into pathetic primitive animals without morals.
I think the chars should swap position in the Easter bunny strip. Maybe cut some lines and words in strips. Don't over-explain things. My first comics are too wordy with me trying to be a scriptwriter in 3 panels and it's hard work for the reader.
This was the advice I was given when I first started whoring myself.
The guy asking to borrow a newspaper was brilliant.
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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.