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Spaceclutch
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http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Spaceclutch

 

4-09-11 9:17am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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#$@. I hate being a newbie. I don't think I put the link in properly for the comic to show up. Also, you'll probably notice a few typos in the strip here and there. I made a donation so I could edit them, but it hasn't processed yet. Hope you like them anyway!

4-09-11 9:20am (new)
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4-09-11 10:16am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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Awesome. Thanks! Here's my latest addition:

 

Robort and Tooty Go to Libya by Spaceclutch
4-09-11
I hate Libya. Remind me why we signed up for this mission?
The Chief of Staff said we owed it to him after you said his wife looked like their dog.
What? Pet's often resemble their masters. I read it in the NY Times. How long did that NATO guy say we have to wait here, anyway. I'm fair-skinned! I can't stand out in the sun all day.
I think I hear them coming now. Great! I have to pee.
Moments Later...
GAAAAAAHHH!!! We're all gonna die!!
This is all your fault!!!

4-09-11 10:33am (new)
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smamurai
Too orangey for crows

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I really like the premise of two guys working in a crumbling business, having to scrabble for food and darkly regressing into pathetic primitive animals without morals.

I think the chars should swap position in the Easter bunny strip. Maybe cut some lines and words in strips. Don't over-explain things. My first comics are too wordy with me trying to be a scriptwriter in 3 panels and it's hard work for the reader.

This was the advice I was given when I first started whoring myself.

The guy asking to borrow a newspaper was brilliant.

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4-09-11 11:24am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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Good advice. Thanks!

I see what you mean about swapping chars around.

Thanks for the comments. :) The next one should be better and have less typos hopefully. I do some of these on my iPhone, so it's easy to screw them up.

4-09-11 2:27pm (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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I know it was a mistype, but I like "Tooty" as a name for that character.

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4-09-11 8:42pm (new)
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