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StacksOnStacks
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Hope you guys like it:

 

4-28-14 2:39pm (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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any feedback would be greatly appreciated? Still trying to figure this out.

4-28-14 4:25pm (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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4-28-14 4:56pm (new)
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moshpitwookie
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The Miley Cyrus one...

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4-28-14 6:14pm (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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4-28-14 7:25pm (new)
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4-28-14 7:39pm (new)
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Injokester
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Welcome to Stripcreator, your humour's solid and you're off to a great start :)

A couple of tips as requested:

 


  • Try to avoid using so much text that it extends the panel upwards, as the background starts to loop.

  • Leave the bubble blank for a pregnant pause, the "..." looks silly as it makes the bubble skinnier than the pointer bit underneath

  • Tidy up the grammar and punctuation a bit, eg; missing full stops, caps at the start of a sentence, "b/c". Just makes it easier to read.


 

Those are just housekeeping points though, you've got the main thing down: the funny :)

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Dinosaurs had eggs bro, the chicken came way later.

4-28-14 8:38pm (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. These are great tips.

In general, are comic strips expected to have proper grammar? 

I honestly have never been an avid comic strip reader, but i found this site and thought it would be an interesting medium to play out some of my twisted humor.

4-28-14 8:47pm (new)
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Injokester
Definitely drunk

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Generally yes with the grammar unless it's necessary for the humour. It's best to avoid anything that might put a reader off as it can detract from the joke.

Stripcreator's a bit different though; you can get away with a LOT more with hand-written text or a comic-style font. Writing in all caps for example - standard anywhere else, but it looks horrible here.

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Dinosaurs had eggs bro, the chicken came way later.

4-28-14 9:49pm (new)
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evil_d
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I endorse all of Injokester's remarks.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

4-29-14 8:43am (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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Thanks for the feedback guys...really had fun making these, looking forward to continuing this series and maybe starting some others

4-29-14 9:07am (new)
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StacksOnStacks
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