So I would like some feedback on my first comic strip. No need to go on and on about my genius a few tomes will do.

I saw the strip but missed the comic!

The Fruits of Punditry by whateversclever 8-16-15

Sharing Economy Arm to spare? White Priviledge Dude, this is my spot. Heritage Your turn to celebrate. Thanks! Much smoother to the tush than maple leaves.

I suspect that I would find this to be biting social commentary, if I could understand it.  But I can't.  It kind of reads like a word-association exercise.  Do a little more connecting the dots for us next time.

Also, you misspelled "privilege".

Welcome to Stripcreator!

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Thanks for the comments! Will take into account next time. Good catch on the spelling mistake. My bad.