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llDayo
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Hi, I just joined, let me know what you think of my comics please. Here's the first one, you can cycle through the rest if you'd like: Bad Decision

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10-07-02 9:19am (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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Not too bad, but most of them seemed kind of flat to me. These two stood out, though:

[Click to view comic: 'Quit flaming!']
[Click to view comic: 'Guy tries to gets laid']

Welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

10-07-02 10:35am (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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||Dayo! Me say ||Dayo!
Daylight comes, and me want to go home!

10-07-02 10:37am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I thought they were good, but "a little flat" is a good description for a lot of them. Although this one's dialoge could have been better, it was fairly amusing, and I love your use of perspective:

[Click to view comic: 'Life's a bench']

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

10-07-02 10:43am (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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Man, this is fun :)
My newest: [Click to view comic: 'Damn smacktards!']

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10-07-02 11:22am (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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Another one:

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[Click to view comic: 'Dead chicken']
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10-07-02 11:39am (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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You're getting better already. I liked your "Stop the MOOing!" series. And I guess I liked the iBox one, although mostly it made me wonder what kind of background I'm missing on this "iBox".

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

10-08-02 4:33pm (new)
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Spankling
Looking for love in ALL the wrong places, baby!

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Comic 93004 (Dead Chicken) shows very good use of perspective change. There are plenty of funnier strippers here, but your structure will serve you well. Keep trying.

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"Jelly-belly gigglin, dancin and a-wigglin, honey that's the way I am!" Janice the Muppet

10-08-02 4:43pm (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks guys, glad to know someone's reading and enjoying them. They're really fun to make! Wish we could do more with the characters and things that we can select to be in the comics like move them around or maybe move the balloons above the characters.

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10-09-02 5:59am (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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10-09-02 8:15am (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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10-09-02 8:34am (new)
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llDayo
Stripcreator Newbie

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[Click to view comic: 'Some people just suck ass']

Dedicated to Ap0ll0 (sp?)

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10-10-02 11:25am (new)
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