Hi, I just joined, let me know what you think of my comics please. Here's the first one, you can cycle through the rest if you'd like: Bad Decision

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Not too bad, but most of them seemed kind of flat to me. These two stood out, though:

Quit flaming! by llDayo 10-07-02

Hey! You've been a great audience! Ever notice how fire burns stuff? It's because of the chemical reaction we have with other obejcts!! Another flame that just isn't funny. Is this thing on?

Guy tries to gets laid by llDayo 10-07-02

Why is that guys always act like they're listening when they're really not? Every guy I meet talks to me with only the thought of getting laid! What does a girl have to do to have an innocent conversation nowadays? Can I see your tits now? Maybe if try hard enough I can become a lesbian. Man, what's wrong with this chick? She obviously wants to do it or she wouldn't be talking to me!

Welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

||Dayo! Me say ||Dayo!
Daylight comes, and me want to go home!

I thought they were good, but "a little flat" is a good description for a lot of them. Although this one's dialoge could have been better, it was fairly amusing, and I love your use of perspective:

Life's a bench by llDayo 10-07-02

This sucks. I'm bored outta my mind. Wanna get frisky? Please shoot me... Oh c'mon! Like you haven't thought about it!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Man, this is fun :)
My newest:

Damn smacktards! by llDayo 10-07-02

We got tanks coming up the flank, we need bazookas here! I'm going to go snipe somewhere. But tanks are coming! We need to hold our position! Don't worry, I'm good at sniping! F@&ing tard!! We're going to lose!! Dammit!! F@&ing cheaterz!!

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Another one:

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Dead chicken by llDayo 10-07-02

You know, I love being a rooster. No worries, all the feed you can eat, and all the hens I can, ahem, well, you know... But lately I've been getting the weirdest looks from Gary, the farmhand that works for Farmer Joe. It all started when I clawed the eyes out of his dog. That mutt was looking at MY women! I had every right to protect my hoes! Sometimes I can feel him watching me, don't know what his problem. Joe was remarking to him how fat I've been getting lately though. Kind of worries me, since, ya know, I taste like chicken. I think I'll make an escape and try to find chicken valley. Grrrrr... Uh oh, looks like I was a little too slow. Well, nice knowing you all, look for me in your grocer's freezer! My new alias will be Purdue!

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You're getting better already. I liked your "Stop the MOOing!" series. And I guess I liked the iBox one, although mostly it made me wonder what kind of background I'm missing on this "iBox".

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Comic 93004 (Dead Chicken) shows very good use of perspective change. There are plenty of funnier strippers here, but your structure will serve you well. Keep trying.

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"Jelly-belly gigglin, dancin and a-wigglin, honey that's the way I am!" Janice the Muppet

Thanks guys, glad to know someone's reading and enjoying them. They're really fun to make! Wish we could do more with the characters and things that we can select to be in the comics like move them around or maybe move the balloons above the characters.

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Stop the MOOing! (part 4) by llDayo 10-09-02

Bessie watching the news... And now the latest...a talking cow has been found! Here's Jacob who witnessed it. Yes, Mrs. Chung, farmer Joe has a talking purple cow. Wow Jacob, a talking purple cow. Why do you think it's purple? I dunno. It's probably gay. That son-of-a-b.....

Stop the MOOing! (part 5) by llDayo 10-09-02

Back out in the field... (munch) (munch)... Back out in the field... Well, look who's here! Come to apologize!? I can't believe you did that! What's wrong with you!? I've lost my job now! Back out in the field... Ah, revenge is so sweet. His desk was bad enough but you shit on his wife too! That's just sick man!!

...more to come

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Stop the MOOing! (part 6) by llDayo 10-09-02

An arguement ensues... So I guess you've learned your lesson now, keep your promises! What lesson!? I'm not making promises to some dumb cow! Now you will feel pain! Fight breaks out... Hwaaahhh!!! Hiyah!! (chop) (kick) Take that! And that!! Well, naw, guess dat wasn't too smart o' heem. Penis gone missing... BTW, Bessie learn'ed that thar ninja stuff, and is a cannibal. Naw, ya think!?

Stop the MOOing! (part 7) by llDayo 10-09-02

Boy he tasted good! Sure hope more them come around! Now, Bessie, ya know you is suppose t' be on dat there diet! I know, but he was skinny so I don't think I took in a lot of fat. And the heat from his anger had him cooked already. Well, I'sa let it go dis time but next time I'sa goin' hafta don maw outfit anna whip ya'! Promise? Boy howdy!!

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Some people just suck ass by llDayo 10-10-02

Rotten, 12-year-old dumbass... Watcha doing? Posting on gamespy's forums. Some guy called me annoying because he finds my posts pointless. That sucks. What're you gonna do about it? Well, I'm finishing up a 1000 word rant on wasting United Way funds. One of my many"pointless" topics. Maybe that guy is just a dick and brainless. I'll go kill him for ya.

Dedicated to Ap0ll0 (sp?)

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