can someone read my newest, lixxx @ aol.com and let me know if it's even remotely ok??? (i have another new one called Mr larry is calling, but that was just a joke for a friend.)

thanx guys!

Old people and the word penis are funny.
But seriously, though I'm new too, I think we should all support each other, so here's my criticism.

The basic premise is funny, but its too wordy. The joke gets muddled down by too much going on. The penis typed in rainbow letters is the funniest idea in there, so why not make it the punch-line? Just my opinion though.

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Sex Piano.

Liked Dr Nash-Ville, made me smile.

(eep double post, personally I blame Thatcher)

Lixx was funny, silver surfers confused by the internet can be nothing but.

The beautiful mind one ruled. I hate that movie. I was soooo pissed when it won things at those awards with the big dildos.

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Sex Piano.