1st one up for scrutiny

Watch over-narrating the comic. Try to let the audience glean what is going on by the action in the comic; having to spell it out is very distracting and often redundant.

I also really enjoyed this one:

Giant Fighting Robots discuss an issue with a pet. by antsey 7-08-03

My dog has no nose. Your dog has no nose? How does he smell? He can't.

Keep at it.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

thanks, the other over narrated ones are "in-jokes".

Thanks for the tip!

The robot one was funny.

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Batman created by Bob Kane

I especially like how you change the background color to establish that the robots are at a rave. Well done.

But seriously, good comic. :)

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Poop.

The robots are at a rave?

Cool!

(i didn't mean that but i'll pretend i did)

Keep it up! :)

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Is it wrong to laugh?

Needs more cow bell.

Needs more cow dung.

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Think classy, you'll be classy.

Needs more chinks.

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I am a Strange One/'His world is small.'/ 'I love hunting foxes - Ginger Bastards!'/ 'They weren't aiming at us, Not at my house' - Dead Prez/ The Pravda-Raï Party: Triumphing over Diversity

Inside joke sorry. Couldn't resist.

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I am a Strange One/'His world is small.'/ 'I love hunting foxes - Ginger Bastards!'/ 'They weren't aiming at us, Not at my house' - Dead Prez/ The Pravda-Raï Party: Triumphing over Diversity

Inside jokes suck. You suck.

Boinky - See comment in the CaS thread.

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I am a Strange One/'His world is small.'/ 'I love hunting foxes - Ginger Bastards!'/ 'They weren't aiming at us, Not at my house' - Dead Prez/ The Pravda-Raï Party: Triumphing over Diversity

I don't get it.

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Think classy, you'll be classy.

Antsey, I love you now please make more strips.

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Zzzzz