1. There's a much easier way to post comics than the way you did it. Click the "quote" link at the bottom of this post to see how it's done.
[Click to view comic: 'Dicks Diary']
2. The word "kthx" should never be used. By anyone. Ever. My using it just now is not an exception. I shouldn't have done that.
3. Try using less narration. Use dialog to convey the same information. We can figure out what's going on in this strip without extra help.
4. Other than that, the comic's okay. Keep at it. Welcome to Stripcreator.
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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
