It's my first attempt at a strip. Please read it or i'll stab myself in the face with this rake.
*holds rake up*
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I bet your mom has a loud bark.

PUHLEASE READ IT!!!
*throws a tantrum*
yeah ... that's right .. you heard me ... a tantrum
:P

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I bet your mom has a loud bark.

1. There's a much easier way to post comics than the way you did it. Click the "quote" link at the bottom of this post to see how it's done.

Dicks Diary by faetastic 10-15-03

Dick decides it's time to go out... Time to go bag me a hoe! To the local hoochie bar... Ugh, here we go... You must wash your clothes with windex... because I can see myself in your pants! Where once again, Dick learns that he's not wanted. Listen buddy ... I already have one asshole in my pants, I don't need another kthxbye. Doh!

2. The word "kthx" should never be used. By anyone. Ever. My using it just now is not an exception. I shouldn't have done that.

3. Try using less narration. Use dialog to convey the same information. We can figure out what's going on in this strip without extra help.

4. Other than that, the comic's okay. Keep at it. Welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

KTHX!

j/k.

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I bet your mom has a loud bark.