I can't believe I'm hearing this shit. Michelangelo's dumps have more artistic value.
All he has to do is "nix the narration, add grammar and make the story flow better"? You make it sound like it's one or two small nitpicks, instead of the entire strip being complete dogshit.
The original strip was a play on my handle, a not-so-subtle point that still flew completely over this tard's head.
As for the other tards saying the second strip is better... even if you're joking, you still gobble cock like it's your job.
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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.