Excellent stuff here, no real feedback apart from keep at it - I thought there was room for improvement in the general pacing of the dialogue, and a couple of jokes were a bit tame (eg punchline is just that the choppingblock characters are scary when the visual of the character isn't quite extreme enough for that), but it's clear that'll all iron itself out once you've got a few strips under your belt.
Welcome to SC :)
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Dinosaurs had eggs bro, the chicken came way later.