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hey, if you want you can read mine. read them all if you make the commitment to read any, there arent that many there, and its my first day so i'm playing around with styles. they're not too great yet, i need more subject material. so any help would rock my socks.

The later few are funny. I especially liked:

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Child molesting and goat-fucking get old though.

Ok, maybe not goat-fucking.

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Sex Piano.

Well I read them all because thats the kind of nice guy I am, I thought the dialogue was really awkward in some of them. Like:

"I shall now proceed to coerce you using only brute strength"

My question to you would be; who the fuck talks like that?

I thought this was the best one:
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That line is ace. Made me want to read the comics. :)

There's potential, some are a bit too wordy but I think you're on the right road. you should use titles though, they can sometimes make or break a comic. A good title is worth the three panels alone.