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hey, if you want you can read mine. read them all if you make the commitment to read any, there arent that many there, and its my first day so i'm playing around with styles. they're not too great yet, i need more subject material. so any help would rock my socks.

The later few are funny. I especially liked:

Untitled by pretentiousyouth 1-18-03

I've been thinking, we should engage in a question answer dialogue that would allow to find out more about eachother, thus strengthening our relationship. You know... I ask you a deep and meaningful question about your views, your hopes, dreams, etc. and you give me an equally deep and provacative answer. Then you ask me a question. Ok? You start. The best relationships are built on Campbells. What's your favorite kind of soup?

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Hi... um... I've never really done this sort of this before... and... umm... i feel a little awkward. but i saw you from across the room... And I just felt so... drawn to you... really hot... yknow? And I don't mean to sound forward... and maybe you're not into this sorta thing but um would you like to engage in sexual intercourse withme? Dawn never could resist a good goat-fuck.

Child molesting and goat-fucking get old though.

Ok, maybe not goat-fucking.

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Sex Piano.

Well I read them all because thats the kind of nice guy I am, I thought the dialogue was really awkward in some of them. Like:

"I shall now proceed to coerce you using only brute strength"

My question to you would be; who the fuck talks like that?

I thought this was the best one:

Untitled by pretentiousyouth 1-18-03

Hi... um... I've never really done this sort of this before... and... umm... i feel a little awkward. but i saw you from across the room... And I just felt so... drawn to you... really hot... yknow? And I don't mean to sound forward... and maybe you're not into this sorta thing but um would you like to engage in sexual intercourse withme? Dawn never could resist a good goat-fuck.

That line is ace. Made me want to read the comics. :)

There's potential, some are a bit too wordy but I think you're on the right road. you should use titles though, they can sometimes make or break a comic. A good title is worth the three panels alone.