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Melkor
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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ei there, these are my first two attempts at writting comics, so tell me what you think
. Be nice. Or be brutal. Or be grim and frostbitten. Just read and comment.

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing']

[Click to view comic: 'The Spandextastic adventures of Future Sergay']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

3-16-04 2:14pm (new)
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John_McGuirk
Stripcreator Newbie

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#1: mmmmmmmmmmm . . uh
#2: ha!
quote: ha and ha

3-16-04 2:42pm (new)
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OMG_DaGmAr_6481987
Stripcreator Regular

Member Rated:

eh heh....

meh.

3-16-04 6:57pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

Member Rated:

The second one was good.

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

3-16-04 8:41pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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The 2nd one was quite good. The first one wasn't quite good enough to be "crappy."

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

3-16-04 9:35pm (new)
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smamurai
Too orangey for crows

Member Rated:

I so concur.

1st one = drab driech day.

2nd one = sunny with occasional outbreaks of bwah ha.

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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.

3-17-04 4:56am (new)
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Melkor
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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thanks for the opinions. Yeah the first one come's out like a very bad trip on Kool Aid, i guess.

[Click to view comic: 'The SpandexTastic Adventures of Future Sergay-2']

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Trigguer Happy God']

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Great Moments in Bliblical History II']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

3-17-04 12:26pm (new)
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Matchbook_Romance
Going. Coming.

Member Rated:

Your last comic has been done a million times but from what I see, you're on the path to some pure comic gold. =D

3-17-04 12:43pm (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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i think those are very good also

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xx( o Y o. )xx

3-17-04 6:18pm (new)
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laughinginyourface
Chuck Norris's bitch

Member Rated:

I would have to agree.

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...and pain joined his urge to percieve...

3-17-04 6:36pm (new)
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HollywoodStew
Stripcreator Newbie

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Wow, i'm very impressed. Bravo!

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jolly_roger2

3-18-04 12:52pm (new)
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Melkor
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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Ei thanks everyone for their feedback!
Its hard working up to a good punchline in just 3 panels (expecially if you're a n00b =p).
Practise make's perfect.

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Great Moments in Biblical History IV']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

3-19-04 8:37am (new)
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theviciousanarchist
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Melkor, your name AND your comics rock. I love LOTR.

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Tout le monde est merde!!!

3-26-04 6:27pm (new)
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