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Lord_Vodek
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Say everything on your mind about these

Lord Of The Nerds by Lord_Vodek
12-11-09
I need a successful seduce check here or I'll never be able to enter the Chamber of Secrets
This is a real challenge...I'm gonna drink a whiskey potion for plus 50 to courage
Hmm maybe I should drink a potion of charisma to improve my chances as well
Just **** me already

Practicing by Lord_Vodek
1-15-10
AHHHHHHHHHHH!
Why are you screaming?
I'm practicing
For what?
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Tribute to squidrabies by Lord_Vodek
2-08-10
Today my gas station tried to kill me
What happened?
It blew itself up while I was in it because I went to a differant station last week
Did you survive?
 No 
That's intense

He does listen by Lord_Vodek
3-10-10
If god is real he should smite me right no-
Umm sir, you're leaning on the "Smite" button
Oh Whoops

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

8-08-10 11:43pm (new)
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Jack In The Box(ers) by Lord_Vodek
3-26-10
Hey did you hear about that new restuaraunt?
Oh yeah what's it called?
Jack In the Boxers, Your mom eats there all the time
Where's it at? And why doesn't she take me?
It's between my legs and you're welcome anytime you want to come

Pregnant IV by Lord_Vodek
4-09-10
You ever get that ominous feeling your life is screwed
Ummm...
No? Why?
She's pregnant...
Haha

Nintendo Wii by Lord_Vodek
4-03-10
Why are you holding your hand out
I was just plaing the Nintendo Wii
Carpul tunnel?
Yeah it was the new Wii Masterbate
Say what?
It's got killer two player action

The Never Ending Series- 2 by Lord_Vodek
4-26-10
You mean I can't talk about how you-
I swear to your god I will kill your with my clubs
You swear to my god? Do you not have a god that you pray too?
I swore to your god to make sure you know how serious I am
I'm athiest.
Fuck you!

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8-08-10 11:46pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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CC 452: Genius by Lord_Vodek
5-20-10
Dude I totally made a new tv show for us
Really? What do you call it?
I call it earth
That's hilarious I heard there was a ****ed up planet named earth
There was...So I put cameras on earth
This is genius!

Bible Rap by Lord_Vodek
5-22-10
In the begginging there was just two Adam and Eve it has to be true
Then god said to Adam don't eat any fruit from this forbidden tree. And Adam said to god yo I got you big G
Then the snake came up to Eve because everyone knows women are easy to deceive

The Adventures of Captain Greek by Lord_Vodek
3-15-10
You've saved the world again Captain Greek
Yes I did
You're a real hero
Yes I am
Do you have a Pinecone stuck up your ass?
Yes I do

Busted Mirror by Lord_Vodek
8-21-09
You suck
You suck
You are retarded
You are retarded
I am gay
You are gay

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8-08-10 11:50pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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The Blue Screen Comedy Club by Lord_Vodek
2-03-09
At the blue screen comedy club satan tries his hand at comedy
Why is the mike so far above my head? Very funny guys.
That's better now heres a true story for you. I was walking down the street and there was a little girl crying cause her puppy was hit by a car.
*chirp chirp*
Hahahahahahahaha oh come on that was classic

Blue Screen Comedy Club (Cont.) by Lord_Vodek
2-03-09
Nothing? Oh well what did satan say to the sinner?
Your mine! Hahahahah
Laugh Damnit people. This is quality ****. How about a racist joke?

Blue Screen Comedy Club (Cont.) by Lord_Vodek
2-03-09
Follow me to the flash back panel
The Flash Back
I'm not giving you my soul for anything.
Your black i don't have to try to get your soul. God don't let ******s go to heaven
Haha that was funny **** haha good times good times

Blue Screen Comedy Club (FIN.) by Lord_Vodek
2-04-09
You guys are all idiots my jokes are funny you shall all pay
Satan has finnally cracked and is causing wanton destruction in downtown Denver we now bring you live to Jimmy the Inappropriate Sportscaster, Jimmy?
With a special guest apperance from: Jimmy the Inappropriate Sportscaster
Well Susan, I'm here in Downtown Denver and this is the most destruction i've seen since the time my ex wife found out I got AIDs from that hooker in Chicago

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8-08-10 11:52pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Voices by Lord_Vodek
11-07-08
You're just jealous cause the voices dont talk to you
freak
the voices tell me im perfectly normal
right...

Another joke
WHY SO SERIOUS?
  by Lord_Vodek, 11-07-08 

Slavery and McCain
McCain Just became president and has reinstated slavery
Think not what you can do for your country but what Brown can do for you.
  by Lord_Vodek, 11-04-08 

The Matrix: Why Neo died by Lord_Vodek
10-31-08
Oops
Morpheus is gonna be PISSED
ERROR ERROR ERROR

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8-08-10 11:58pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Romeo ****s up by Lord_Vodek
3-26-09
The Honey Moon
*Juliet Juliet Juliet Juliet Juliet Juliet*
*Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo*
*Mercutio*
*Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo Romeo*
Fuck
Who?

The Hero Brigade! by Lord_Vodek
9-12-09
Crippled Carl! Beaten Bobby!
Blind Brittany! Drunk Darrel!
Skeleton Steve! And Porky Pual!
We are so screwed

Double Dipping by Lord_Vodek
9-26-09
Didn't I **** you last week?
Uhh...
No...
Good...I hate Double Dipping

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8-09-10 12:01am (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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Started out good and went downhill.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

8-09-10 7:20am (new)
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biped
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Reading them all at once is like watching an extra-wacky episode of "Laugh-In."

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

8-09-10 9:31am (new)
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ZMannZilla
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I only liked the first two.  The rest read like very rough first drafts of a potentially funny joke.

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"He was cursed with a horrorshow of a face, like Guiseppe Archbold doing a study of mollusk tumors."

8-09-10 10:44am (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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So they all need some work...pointers on ways to improve?

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8-09-10 12:58pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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biped wrote:

Reading them all at once is like watching an extra-wacky episode of "Laugh-In."


Thanks! I think....

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8-09-10 1:11pm (new)
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ZMannZilla
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Lord_Vodek wrote:

So they all need some work...pointers on ways to improve?


Like I said, your comics are like a Step One in a process that requires at least 5 steps.  My advice would be to take the basic idea for your strip and jot it down in, say a Notepad document or something.  Then, give it a day or so to bounce around in your head, see if you can find a way to make it wackier.

EXAMPLE 1: Jack In The Box(ers)

For this one, you've taken a pretty common joke and just kind of left it there.  This dialogue might be snappier in real life, but it doesn't support the whole comic, mostly because the punchline becomes obvious in Panel Two.  So, while workshopping this one, you may decide that slipping a "surprise" punchline into Panel Three will help this problem.  I've made a comic to demonstrate how I'd handle it:

Vodekution (Part One) by ZMannZilla
8-09-10
I bet you didn't know I'm a restaurant owner.
You're right, I didn't know that. What's the name of your restaurant?
Jack In The Boxers. Oh, and your mom eats there all the time.
I wonder why she's never taken me there?
It's between my legs, and you're welcome to eat there any time.
Oh, that explains it. She knows I prefer large portions.

EXAMPLE 2: Voices

This comic has virtually no punchline in its present state. Again, workshopping this one and tossing it around before completing the comic could have benefitted you.  I've also created a modest example of how this one could have been improved:

Vodekution (Part Two) by ZMannZilla
8-09-10
Go away, freak.
You're just jealous because the voices don't talk to you.
Whatever.
The voices tell me I'm perfectly normal.
No we don't.
N'GUH!

Hope this helps.  If you'd like someone to bounce ideas off of, feel free to IM me any time.

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8-09-10 4:02pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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You have made my comics but better...thanks...I think...hmmm

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8-09-10 5:14pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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8-10-10 11:51am (new)
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HCRoyall
100mg Thorazine, Please

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The sad thing is, that last group of comics pretty accurately describes any group o' newbs and quite  alot of experienced players.  And it reminds me of my current group.  Even though it makes me cry inside, I laughed on the outside.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s **** robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

8-13-10 11:13am (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Lord_Vodek
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8-20-10 2:17pm (new)
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ZMannZilla
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*cough* Watchmen *cough cough*

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"He was cursed with a horrorshow of a face, like Guiseppe Archbold doing a study of mollusk tumors."

8-20-10 4:37pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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